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Offline Octavia1

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #15 on: September 15, 2022, 11:13:49 pm »
Whats a valued contributor?
A philantropissed
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #16 on: September 15, 2022, 11:15:03 pm »
Anyhow, you'll have to forgive me for the spelling mistakes but I wrote the story on a quiet Tuesday night whilst sitting on the rank in O'Devaney Gardens

Didn't know ther was a rank ther Ken...eh I mean Oliver  oops
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #17 on: September 16, 2022, 11:30:46 am »
Ken??
Nope ! Not me Bubba.
Fer starters I have a very different type of punctuation and little knowledge of Doob city.

But the poster did not write this article on here as some of his punctuation graphics are not available on this forum, so it was copied and pasted from somewhere else to here, possibly overseas.

At a very Wild guess I would go fer ex-pat Dooblin Taxi driver (or his son) now living in Canada.

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #18 on: September 16, 2022, 12:36:36 pm »
Exec sum:

“I’ll tell you there’s only two rules for this here game pal,” spilled the Devil himself. “If they look wrong they are wrong and don’t drive if you’re tired.”

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #19 on: September 16, 2022, 03:52:45 pm »
Ken??
Nope ! Not me Bubba.
Fer starters I have a very different type of punctuation and little knowledge of Doob city.

But the poster did not write this article on here as some of his punctuation graphics are not available on this forum, so it was copied and pasted from somewhere else to here, possibly overseas.

At a very Wild guess I would go fer ex-pat Dooblin Taxi driver (or his son) now living in Canada.
I taut it was a  smashing piece Ken...I was riveted.....
Well done  ::clap
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #20 on: September 16, 2022, 06:24:29 pm »
Drive on through the wind and the rain,
Look for the beauty in the dull and mundane...

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #21 on: September 16, 2022, 07:48:28 pm »
Drive on through the wind and the rain,
Look for the beauty in the dull and mundane...

Inspirational!!

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #22 on: September 16, 2022, 08:04:06 pm »
Anyhow, you'll have to forgive me for the spelling mistakes but I wrote the story on a quiet Tuesday night whilst sitting on the rank in O'Devaney Gardens
You must have held on to the story for a few years, O'D. Gardens are gone and there was never a rank there. 8)

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #23 on: September 16, 2022, 09:01:52 pm »
Drive on through the wind and the rain,
Look for the beauty in the dull and mundane...

Inspirational!!

Absolutely hal ....we hav a  literary scholar on taxi chat ... tings ar lookin up .. :2cheers
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #24 on: September 16, 2022, 09:10:29 pm »
Anyhow, you'll have to forgive me for the spelling mistakes but I wrote the story on a quiet Tuesday night whilst sitting on the rank in O'Devaney Gardens
You must have held on to the story for a few years, O'D. Gardens are gone and there was never a rank there. 8)

Artistic licence bullits ....strumpet City was full of geographical errors ....a piece of art without flaw alienates the reader or viewer of a fine paintin or great book  ....
Sure I was watchin Ben hur one day an I seen a bloke wearin jeans in the background...it actually made the film  more believable for some  inexplicable reason ....
Art is full of deliberate mistakes ...yu havin a keen photografic eye can probably immediately spot the deliberate mistake in this monet for example  :)


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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #25 on: September 16, 2022, 09:55:07 pm »
As Bob Ross ( God be good to him ) said
"We don't make mistakes....we make happy accidents "  lol
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #26 on: September 17, 2022, 10:04:52 am »
Ireland, not Canada - proud, grateful, one-car-one-plate Dublin taxi driver

Not a literary scholar - Grade D Leaving Cert. English - tnx 4 compliment

Warts-and-all mistakes are part and parcel - work towards capturing the vernacular

First story published, to its rightful place - write what you know about, a good tale well told - simples

Sincere tnx to those who've directed their (right-thinking) minds in posting under story
good, bad or downright indifferent

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Ollie and the Vampire

Ollie goes to the Moon

Ollie finds on-street parking in Tullamore

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #27 on: September 17, 2022, 10:27:03 am »
...... I taut it was a  smashing piece Ken...I was riveted.....
Well done  ::clap
I would love to take the credit Octy, but it's not my work.

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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #28 on: September 17, 2022, 11:12:30 am »
It sorta proves that you dont know …..WTF anybody is on blog sites and what alias they use.The article was very good, whoever you are? ::cheers
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Re: First Taxi Fare
« Reply #29 on: September 17, 2022, 12:09:11 pm »
It sorta proves that you dont know …..WTF anybody is on blog sites and what alias they use.The article was very good, whoever you are? ::cheers
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